STANDING IN THE STORM, The Many Worlds of William Alan Webb

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Why I’m a Pantser, or Where did this new story come from?

 

I’m a Pantser. I sit down to write without a whole lot of pre-planning about what I’m going to write. For example, when I woke up this morning, writing a blog entry wasn’t on my to-do list for the day. Other writers outline everything they do, and I confess I’ve tried doing that, but so far I can’t do it. Outlines just don’t make sense to me when I try to plan out my stories.

When people ask what advice I would give a new or unpublished writer, or someone who has writer’s block (which I don’t believe in, by the way), my advice is always the same: don’t edit as you go. Write and don’t read what you’ve written until you’re finished, and whatever you do, don’t try to edit what you just wrote. This goes along with my Pantser style…Write ’em all, let God sort ’em out.

It took me thirty long years of struggle to reach the point where I could do that, but when I finally did I started writing at a pace that surprises even me. Now I just write stuff when I think of it and my production has gone way up.

But I’m a lucky guy and I know it.

Like so many writers I have more ideas swimming around in my brain than I could ever possibly write into a cohesive format. Unlike most writers I know, I actually have the time to piddle around with some of the stranger ones. And the great thing about being a Pantser is that I can do it without forethought.

I’m now 10k words into a bizarre story that I neither planned or even dreamed of ahead of time. It wasn’t even one of my secret projects because I literally had no inkling about it before I started typing. One night a few weeks ago I started writing and poof! there it was. I think it’s pretty good, too, but who knows?

How long will it be, what genre is it, all that good stuff comes later. Right now I have no idea. And that’s because I’m a Pantser. My path leads into the wild unknown, and I wouldn’t have it any other way.

 

2018 Writing Resolutions

 
  1. Decide which cons I’d like to attend next year and see if they would like to have me. So far none have responded to my inquiries.
  2. Finish writing the fourth novella in my new series Sharp Steel and High Adventure. The story is titled The Demon In the Jewel.
  3. Finish cover for The Demon in the Jewel.
  4. Find new talent to mentor in business. Some of you might not know it, but I’m a business consultant and mentor on top of everything else. I have recently found an impressive young man to mentor and it rekindled the fire to do it again. (Like so many others this young person discovered that work is WORK, and decided to quit at the first obstacle.) If you know of anyone who might like to become a successful business owner, send them my way. But be warned: they’ve got to be serious, I don’t have time to waste trying to motivate those who aren’t ready to do what is necessary to succeed.
  5. Outline book 4 of The Last Brigade.
  6. Write book 4 of The Last Brigade.
  7. Finish prequel to The Last Brigade titled Not Enough Bullets.
  8. Finish writing  Killing Hitler’s Reich: The Battle For Austria, 1945
  9. Finish re-writing and editing two short stories written with Tom Russell, then submit.
  10. Write 5th fantasy novella. Secret title.
  11. Continue submitting short story Tail Gunner Joe to markets.
  12. Re-write short story Winter Storm.
  13. Outline and prepare for writing partially written novel currently titled The Time of Your Life, which will likely be re-titled something like The Prison of Time.
  14. Decide whether to pursue partly written novel currently titled Suntans Within Suntans.
  15. Begin outline for novel idea The Halls of Heaven.
  16. Begin outline for two full length novels in Sharp Steel and High Adventure series, a prequel and a sequel to the novellas.
  17. Learn how the f*** to use Scrivener. This will need to be done before I can outline book 4.
  18. Record audiobook of me reading The Last Attack and/or Unsuck Your Book. Use the result of this to determine whether I can do justice to the Brigade or Sharp Steel books.
  19. Get a recording of Standing The Final Watch on the market, regardless of who is reading it.
  20. . Write sequel to Unsuck Your Book.
  21. Outline and begin writing We Are Rome.
  22. Write book proposal for same.
  23. Outline unnamed alternate history novel about the War for Southern Independence.
  24. Outline prequel for The Last Brigade, tentatively titled Collapse.
  25. Sleep. This is optional.

Are you listening?

 

Famous (read as highly paid) writers may have transcended those moments of self-doubt that torment the rest of us. Maybe George R.R. Martin, Nora Roberts, Michael Connelly or Brandon Sanderson wake up every day with the foreknowledge that every word they type is golden. That people are eagerly waiting to pay to read those words like they were painted in gold. And don’t get me wrong, I don’t begrudge them a penny of their money; they’ve earned it.

But for the rest of us confidence in our work is a daily struggle. And for those with a regular job and the obligations of a family it can finally wear you down.

All of us live with friends and family who don’t understand the process of writing. When we’re typing that’s an action most can interpret, but when we’re staring out into space, or mumbling to ourselves, or doing any number of others things to try and force our brain into connecting plot threads or remembering words, that’s when people think we’re not working or we’re wasting time. The truth is that’s as much a part of the writing process as typing. And the whole time we’re doing whatever rituals we do to try and create magic on the page, we’re asking ourselves why we’re doing it because nobody cares. We’re telling ourselves it’s all just a big waste of time.

A young lady I greatly admire is struggling today with whether or not to continue writing. I don’t know her, we’ve never met and I’ve never spoken to her. And yet just last night I told my writer’s group about her. She’s a 23 year old mom who lives in Texas and works at Wal-Mart. But she also has multiple novels out and the newest one topped out on Amazon around #8000. In case you don’t know, that’s damned good. Most writers never sniff such a high rating.

Today she wants to quit. She’s wondering what the point is to it all. Writing can suck the life out of you, especially if you’re self-pubbed or with a small press. No doubt she has missed some events with her son because of writing. Her family is probably asking why they don’t see her more, or why she can’t help with this or that. And it’s not their fault. They’re not writers, they don’t know. But other writers do. We know what that’s like. If we don’t hear it now, today, we’ve certainly heard it in the past.

Yet to succeed we have to keep at it no matter what. I wish I had. I wish that I hadn’t listened to the voice in my head telling me to give up 25 years ago. I can’t make up that time and I wish that I could. If I could strangle that voice with my bare hands I would. Instead, all I can do now is try and be as productive as possible in whatever time I have left.

So don’t follow in my mistakes. Don’t do what I did. Keep writing. Are you listening Kayla?

One Writer’s Life

 

Late Sunday night, that would be Dec. 10th, 2017, I emailed the 5th draft of Standing At The Edge, The Last Brigade Book 3, to my editor at Dingbat Publishing, J. Gunnar Grey. After the first draft I was lucky enough to get detailed feedback from four beta readers. Since then I’ve done a content edit, a timeline edit and two line by line edits. That’s about all I can do with it for now.

I trust Gunnar’s judgment implicitly and give her much of the credit for why The Last Brigade series has sold tens of thousands of copies. (Book 2 had over 2,000 pre-orders.) So sending it off has become very safe for me, which most writers will tell you is NOT how they feel about showing their work to others.

I’d already missed my self-imposed deadline, which put me back on all the other projects on my schedule. So as I wait to hear back from Gunnar, what now? What does an author do when they finish a book?

This writer immediately starts another one. I call this my secret project. In this case it’s a book from long ago that I quit working on after 27k words and which now sits at 36k. I realized that a big chunk of it needed a severe edit. It’s almost all exposition and description but the problem is…it’s damned good exposition and description. I’d forgotten how far I was along the road of that style of writing. The problem is that my style now is vastly different from what it was then.

But a major plot hole was fixed by a chance meeting with fellow writer Susan McKenzie, who also happens to be a nuclear engineer. Once I told her the plot she described a whole new motivator for my bad guys and it fit perfectly! So that’s what I’m doing today.

As those who know me are aware, I NEVER work on one project by itself. I can do it in short bursts to meet a deadline, but not for too long. So I’m learning to use Scrivener to outline book 4 of the Last Brigade, tentatively titled Standing By The Abyss.

I’m also prepping to do a looonnngggg deep dive into the WW2 book in 2018, because by contract it must be finished by Dec. 31, 2018.

In the meantime I’m waiting with bated breath to hear back from Gunnar. Tick, tick, tick…

#7 is done!

 

Last night I turned in the finished manuscript for Standing At The Edge. At this point it’s the longest novel I’ve written since 1986 @ 124k words.  This was #7 on my writer’s agenda that I published in a blog post back in August. Here’s a link to that post:

http://thelastbrigade.com/a-writers-schedule/

That’s not the end of it, of course. Now it’s the publisher’s turn and I anticipate some major revisions. During the rewrites and edits I’ve already shifted several plot lines to book 4, and that could happen again. Of course, should I be correct that just means that book 4 is that much closer to written!

It took me a solid nine months to write this book. If you’d asked me five years ago how long it would take to accomplish such a thing I’d have said years, not months. But now, with more than 10 books out and more on the way, nine months seems like forever.

The hope is that Standing At The Edge will be out before Christmas. If it is then you’ll know Santa Claus is real, because that’ll be my Christmas present.

Editing decisions, they all count

 

I’m in the middle of editing Standing At The Edge, The Last Brigade Book 3, and I realized how many thousands of little decisions go into the making of just one book. Let me give you a few examples.

First is the timeline. I’m a pantser, which means I write by the seat of my pants, making it up as I go. That’s not to say I haven’t outlined things in my head, only that I haven’t written them down and don’t follow a set script when I write. And here’s a confession for you: I wish that I could write that way. It would make the editing so much easier. But I can’t. I’ve tried and failed. I’m going to try again with book 4. I’ll let you know how that goes.

Anyway, the timeline is tricky. This book jumps to different locales and as the author I want to stay with characters long enough for the reader to connect with them. But what if others things are happening at the same time? Do I adhere to a strict chronological timeline at the expense of following a subplot until it reaches a logical breakpoint, and then go back in time when I switch to another subplot? It’s not as easy as it sounds. Some people prefer it one way, some the other.

You also have to make sure that all of the facts and revelations line up with one another. For example, does an action early in the book have repercussions later? Does someone make a reference that hasn’t happened yet? You’ve got to think about all of this.

Then comes the content edit. Anything that doesn’t advance the narrative has to go. In Standing At The Edge I’ve already moved two plot lines to book 4, which is awesome because I haven’t even started writing that book and it’s already close to 20k words.

But the hardest part for me is the line edit. I read every single word in the book at least three times. I agonize over every visual, every description, every phrase. I speak every word of dialogue out loud to ensure that it sounds natural for that character. It’s a long, hard and grinding process.

And the whole time I’m doing it the next book on my schedule is running through my mind like a movie in the background. It’s  distracting!

But I’m lucky. I have a publisher who happens to be the editor’s equivalent of Lebron James. I don’t have to make my book perfect because, after putting three of my books on the market, I know she will put on that final polish that makes it special.

If you self publish I strongly suggest that you interview editors until you find one that works for you, then pay them whatever they charge to make your books awesome.

 

 

How to be a writer and #6, #7 and #15 done

 

One of the most common questions young or new writers have for me is what all is involved in becoming a writer. The process itself seems arcane to many people, as if there’s a sorcerous incantation only known to initiates of a secret order of writers. They all want admittance into this secret society.

The incantation itself does exist. Instead of a chant, however, it’s accompanied by a different sound. Namely, the clacking of a keyboard as you’re typing words.

If you’re gonna be a writer you have to write. It really is that simple.

Here’s an update on me plugging away at the to-do list.

#6 involved attending my scheduled cons and I did. Imaginarium in Louisville was a blast.

#7 was finishing book 3 of The Last Brigade. This is done, in line-by-line edits now and the cover is finished. Waiting for the final analysis by two more beta readers.

#15 is pulling out the novel previously titled Hard Time and starting it back up. That’s now done, I’ve added about 5k words to it.

Non-fiction World War 2 book coming in 2019!

 

It is with incredible pride (and more than a little astonishment) that I announce having signed with Helion Books to write a book on a long-ignored campaign of World War 2! The book is due for the market in 2019.

More details will be coming later, but for now here’s a link to their website: http://www.helion.co.uk/

But be careful! They have so many amazing books you’ll end up buying something!

 

Unsuck your book test

 

This is a test for me reading my own audio books. I’m looking for input here.

 

Cross off 3 more

 

Working hard. #3, #19 and #22 are off the list now.

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